WA 6 comment to revised

Rubric for WA#6

Criteria	Ratings	Pts
Does the first sentence include the adjective to describe the person?	Comments Very good first sentence.	2 / 2 pts
Do you include time clauses? Do you include adverb clauses with because/even though/although? Are they formed correctly?	Comments Good job with the adverb clauses.	3 / 3 pts
Do you include a lot of detail to show how the person acts in that way? Do you keep your focus on one adjective only?	Comments Excellent detail about your hardworking boss. He is a busy man! Great job of showing me all of the things that he has done with his work.	5 / 5 pts
Do you edit carefully for correct grammar and punctuation?	Comments The first part of the paragraph looks really good. You start making mistakes in the last section. Be sure to edit the whole paragraph carefully.	3 / 5 pts
Total Points: 13