table home work ? review and correction (DKTZK)

Table below show
language of change
comparison or language of change
(more than one item ) is comparison
line graph we use language of change
visits (thousands )
this graph is not showing percentage
Number of visitor
selecting and reporting the main feature
အထူးၿခား ဆုံး ၊ အနဲ ဆုံး ၾကည္႕မယ္
tip
The most significant to describe
not all the figure shown in the figure

(၁)စမွတ္ နဲ႕ ဆုံး မွတ္ ကို ေၿပာ မယ္ ( ၂၀၀၆ -၂၀၁၀ ) ကိုေ ၿပာမယ္
(၂) overview ( sentences 2)
The number of visitors to Australia from the most countries increase to 2006 to 2010.

all the countries are increase except Japan .
only japan is decreased
Most countries or 5 out of 6 countries
ပို ေကာင္ းေအာင္ ဘယ္ လို ေရးမလည္ း (except Japan /apart from Japan)
Most countries
all countries
six countries
you can write in overview
overall , except from japan
all countries except from japan

No3
why it is not correct
2006 -2010
2008-2009 ( remove)
you should konw which country you should follow )

China ဆုံးမွတ္ က ေန စ မွတ္ ကို နွုတ္ (၃၆၀-၂၆၇=၉၃)
Germany ( 159-143) =16
Newzeland     1011-979=32
canada

China is the biggest increase
Japan decrease almost halved ( language of change )



4 paragraph

This figure/diagram/table/graph shows
introduction
paraphrasing

The table states (depicts ) how many tourists
The number of tourist from 6 countries to australia


except from japan all the countries ----most countries / five out of six countries
China /language of change
comparison

the biggest increase ( the highest increase )
went up significantly


comparison
= the biggest /
=the most visitor
=fewer visitor

upward trend

china / new zeland/french
canada/germany

french and new zeland

အေရးၾကီးတာအရင္ ဆြဲ ထုတ္ ေရး
ေပါင္ းေရးေရး
(၆ခုထဲ မွာ ဘာ ထူး ၿခား  )
increase တက္ တာ အနည္ းဆုံး
the smallest increase ( e.g compare to other countries china is the smallest increase
by သုံးထား တယ္ ဆို ရင္ ေနာက္ ဆုံး မွတ္ က ေန စမွတ္ နွုတ္ ထား
By differences from --------in 2006 t0 -------- in 2010


Reached ----360000-----
increased to 360000
decreased to 360000
by
although ကို ဘယ္ ခ ်ိန္ မွာ သုံ းမလည္း ( ဆန႕္ က ်င္ ဘက္ ကို က ် သြား )
နယူးဇီလန္  From 2006 to 2010 this country
Although in 20006 decrease visitor , from 2006 to 2010 over the whold perod this country had the most visitors with the notable increase from 979000 to 1011000.

with ( noun phrase )


french ( comparative ) you can use superlative
e.g the fewest visitor

rose considerably
increased from 320000 to 450000 in between 2010 and 2018 (over the year)


connect with (of) because the sentence is noun phrase



The number of tourist from china to Australia increased significantly



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