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Entertainment equipment in children's the bedrooms,by age of children in the UK


write the introduction in front of overall
Overall ,
However,
although
But  ( linking verb)
were more likely to have
than
more than

the most popular item
gain
second most popular item
although
much smaller percentage
very few
In conclusion ( comparison )
The more
likely to
the older

Overview sentences
( check in the first page of no 3

More + likely to + verb
Main subject ( the oldest children ) were more likely to have entertainment equipment in the room than

extrainformation ( e.g U Mya is my uncle ) U Mya , a doctor , is my 
U mya is my uncle . ( main stencence )
additional information . he is doctor .

Overview
the most significant age group to write
However more 4-9 years old did have 4 satellite TV in their bedrooms than the other two age groups .
Except satellite TV older children more likely to have in their room

Body
The most popular
( more than 3 item ) superlative degree ( you can rank)
five item ( televesion is the most
second ( game the second most popular
ranking  ၾကီးစဥ္ငယ္လုိက္ စီ
အမ ်ား ဆုံးနဲ႕ ဒုတိယအမ ်ား ဆုံး ကို ခြဲ ထုတ္ လိုက္ ( ranking  )
television and game ( superlative )
The most popular item for all groups was the television with over


age group 10-15 and 4-9
language of change ( ဆက္သြယ္ ေပးမယ္ ဆို ရင္ စာ ေၾကာင္ းနဲ႕ ဂဏန္း ကို ဆက္ မယ္ ဆို ရင္ with နဲ႕ ဆက္

comparison structure ေတြ ကို ဂဏန္းနဲ႕ ေဖာ္ ၿပတယ္
e.g The most popular item


with 80%  or at 80 %


V+ing
S+ V+ O ,+ ing
contributing to 80 %
showing
representing
sh

The most popular sport was swimming

swimming has the highest percentage of member

The majority o members participated in swimming

participate

The most member
the majority of member
involved
took part
participate
same meaning different vocabulary

with /at ( language of change ) increased to  20 %
decreased to
the main stable at

peak at
started at
The most popular sport was


စာေၾကာင္းရဲ႕ subject အေၾကာင္း ကို ခ ် ဲ ႕ ေရ း
Swimming , accounting for 80 % of members , waas the most popular sport.


comma is important