Writing editing advice

The dog is ten years old ( do not use The dog has ten years old) 
The dot is thirsty. She wants water ( do not use have with hungry, thirsty, hot , cold or afraid)
Don’t forget verb to be

Remember some words that end in ed are adjective not verb
We are excited about our new puppy.

The relationship between people and pets in the US. Sometimes strange to me.I surprised that American thinks of their pets as part of the family . I am have a new American friend,  Marianne .
She live alone , but she has a dog, Sparky. Marianne treats him like a child . I not very interested in him, but always she wants to show me pictures of him on her phone. She thinks every one want to see them, but i think she wrong. She often buy Tys for him especially on his birthday . He has twelve years old , so she spends a lot of money on vet bills too. How much cost a visit to the Vet . At least 100$.
She have several coats for him for the winter weather , but he don’t like to wear them.
So when they go outside in winter , he has cold . She buys sometimes expensive food for him .
He likes steak . She sometimes calls him on the telephone when she not home and talk into the answering machine. Sparky always sleeps in bed with her .
When she goes to work, she uses a dog walking service . Someone twice a day comes to her house to play with sparky and take him for awalk. She says that he gets lonely if he is home alone all day.
Once a month , she takes him a dog groomer. What means dog groomer? This is a professional that gives Sparky a bath and cuts and paints his nails . Nothing cost too much money when it comes to Sparky.
Sometimes I m think American dog live better than most people in the world .

Watch video and describe the behaviour of animial ?
What does video teach you about the animal?