essay writing DKTZK

 

	Medicine -
conventional		Alternative
western		Traditional  ( estern )

 

Body paragraph  writing
format

idea  (3 item  ) or 2  item
if too much idea become lack of supporting
idea need to be correct
how much you can support the idea

you will get full mark on more support on the idea

at least

body

for and against
advantages and disadvantages

topic sentences

paragraph first sentences ( topic sentences )


On the one hand  ( တၿခား ဟာနဲ႕ တြဲ မသုံးဘူး ) On the other hand န ဲ႕  ဘဲ သုံးတယ္
On the other hand (However , By contrast )
( write the opposite writing )
စာပိုဒ္ နွစ္ ပိုဒ္ ယွဥ္ ေရး တဲ႕ အ ခါ ေရး တယ္
comparison

however

although ေရွ ႕ မွာ ထား လည္ းရ အလယ္ မွာ ထား လည္ းရ
noun phrase + V  ing
incomparison 
On the one hand နဲ႕ စခဲ ႕ ရင္ ေနာက္ တပိုဒ္ က On the other hand

first of all  ( To begin )
second   ( furthermore )
finally 


similar trend
same disadvantages
further more
in addition

moreover
furthermore
what is more


Process / circle  ( step by step )
sequencer ( line graph
change ( use in table  )


One point of view 


for negative


 

some people advocate  + V ing or now phrase

support the view that
oppose the view that



main point

idea 2
support

due to the fact that  ( နွစ္ ေၾကာင္း ဆက္  ရ မယ္ )
Because ( follow by subject 1 )


Ving  + improving my English
N phrase =>improvement in my english

English improvement
I want to improment my english therefore I am learning IELTs

so that


 

so that I am studying ielts .
N + the result
Studying IELTs result in my English improvements

to + ving or (noun)
to learning English
to learn English

such as လို႕ ေရး ရင္ ဥပမာ ၃ ခု ေလာက္ ေဖာ္ ၿပ ရ မယ္ ။